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Never give your heart away

To give it away
To dabble in love
To act with passion and kindness
Is such an affair that will shatter even the strongest soul

Its so easy to trust in love
Believe that the right person could care endlessly for you

But as I have found
Girls are like a Rose

Attracting with beauty, charm, compassion
For a time you are left in a state of happiness
Your troubles leave you

But just as a Rose has its thorns
Do does a girl

Making your soul bleed slowly...forever

For love is but a game
Emotions easily turned off
Her 'love' easily cast aside

For inside she knows you are replaceable
In a month
In a week
In a day

For the Rose will always attract another
And the thorn's mark will never heal

So never give away your heart
And never trust a Rose
©2007-2009 ~Jedi-Consular
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Author's Comments

this is a pretty simple poem written one night while eating alone thinking...wtf??

the concept is basic...its no secret to guys that sometimes girls can be very passionate and caring one moment and rather coarse and cold the next. this often leaving the guy wonder exactly what he should think about the whole thing. this also gives in to the concept that some girls are rather flirtatious in nature and are pretty good at making guys think their serious when their not.

i started the first line thinking of a poem a friend once gave me titled 'never give all the heart'. it had the same tone and message to it but since i could only remember the first line i wasn't worried about copying it >;P

and as a last second change i added the last two lines and changed 'rose' to a noun by always capitalizing it. this adds a little confusion to it i think since i could either be marking rose as important or as being an actual person since it has been used as a girls name.

why did i do this? i think its a combination between it being 1:30 am (cant sleep) and just wanting to add a bit uniqueness into an otherwise normal poem

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